Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Baseball with Cola

Every Thursday rm 15 go to play Baseball with Cola at the bottom field. When we got there Cola divided us in to two teams, one team was called Cola the other was called Pepsi. I was in Cola.

My team was batting first. When I was waiting for my turn to bat I had butterflies in my stomach, because I was thinking that I was going to do a very bad hit or miss the ball. It was almost my tern I felt like I wanted to walk away but I didn’t because I was also excited.

Finally it was my turn. I hit the ball as hard as I could and I thought that I did a pretty good hit. Running as fast as I could I sprinted on the bases but Brodie already had the ball. I thought that I could make it but he got me and I didn’t get a home run.

After the game it was time to go back to class. I had a great day. I can’t wait for next Thursday.


  1. Hi Jouan.
    Wow Jouan!!! That sounds so much fun and those names are quiet interesting.I love the writing you did it just made me want to read more but there is just one spelling mistake and you need to edit.


  2. hello jouan love your story about playing baseball
    from friend [not saadiya or hajra it stars with a m who is it hmmmmmmmm

  3. WOW jouan you must have fun playing baseball, plus that was an AMAZING story omg it was a very lovely story

    LOVE mum,dad,ronn and rodd aka oddey

  4. wow jones great sore

    jorden & ron

  5. Hi Jouan,

    What a great story and WOW! its so amazing that you had used some very powerful words you ROCK!.I also liked the way you had been so great at writing when I was reading your story I just wanted to keep on reading it.Keep it up.

  6. hi jouann good store

    from chiag po

  7. Thank you Chiag po, Hajira, Mohammed, Taeshll, Jordan, Ronn, mum dad and Rodd for your comments!!!

  8. Wow jouan that is a cool story

    from chaig po

  9. Hi BFF, How are you? I love your story about baseball. We go do it too. It is fun! I am shy when I bat I get really shy I want to scream but I don't. I am sorry you didn't get a home run but you had fun.

    See you later Bff

  10. Hi BFF, I am good. Thank you. I know. It is fun. I get shy to. See you later.

    PS: LOL :)

  11. hi jouan
    what an awesome story

    keep up the good work girl

    from your bff

  12. Hi Jouan,
    Great story! Sounded like you played a good game and had heaps of fun. I also enjoy baseball when my class plays. Keep up the good work, Jouan!


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