Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Holiday Highlight



Excitedly rushing to get out of the car, I quickly grabbed a fishing rod and and ran as fast as a eagle swooping down from the sky. I went fishing with my mum, dad, two brothers our CFC friends. My mum didn't know how to cast the fishing line so she asked my dad to our friends dad caught the first fish it was very small my. My mum and I almost caught a fish but we caught a pies of plastic. While the kids where looking at the fish they caught, my mum caught her own fish, my mum was thrilled. After that we kids kept looking at the fishes we even named the fishes. Then it was time to go home.

I hope we can do this again.
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13 comments:

  1. Mrs SamuelsMarch 4, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    Hi Jouan,
    Fantastic holiday highlight! I liked your creative recount of your fishing trip - if I close my eyes, I can imagine what it would have been like to be there. Keep up the awesome effort!

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  2. myaMarch 7, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    WOW jouan what an awesome holiday highlight!!! it was so amazing.

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  3. JouanMarch 7, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    Why thank you Mya.

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  4. saadiyaMarch 7, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    Hi Jouan

    I liked the similar words that you used like fast as a eagle swooping down from the sky. Maybe you could put an space after an full stop.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 7:30 PM

    what an awesome story jouan

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  6. senoraMarch 9, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    wow jouan this story is so awesome!!!:)

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  7. robin nafoiMarch 9, 2011 at 7:46 PM

    keep it up jouan

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  8. leleaiMarch 10, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    wow so your jouan, mya always talks about you.:)

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  9. AsenaMarch 14, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    Hi Jouan...

    That was an interesting story. Maybe next time you can just try to use one and.By the way that was interesting!

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

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  10. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    hollow jouan what an awesome store

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  11. JouanMarch 21, 2011 at 10:02 AM

    Thank you

    Everybody for commenting me!

    Have a nice day

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  12. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    wow Jones what an awsome store



    from jorden

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  13. JouanApril 7, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    Thank you every body

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